This was so long and boring the first time I read it. I hate long and boring. so I spiced it up a little, and shortened it. Marc was too much in the first draft.
My favorite scene is the first and last for this chapter, so the middle may be gooey.
This is the most weird chapter, in the respect that I swore by the original copy in the beginning than TOTALLY started rewording and paraphrasing.
Happy Mother's Day!!!
<3 HRT
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